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December 29, 2004
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CYBERSHOT 10/100 second F/3.5 10 mm 200 Jan 21, 2004, 12:12:38 AM |
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It reminds me of the Crayola store at a local mall here.
There is this huge colour wheel. Different crayons.
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good bgt komposisinya..
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I once read that if you can incorporate an S bend into your photography (ie a river, road or some other natural kind of curve) you pretty much have a competition-winner. My eyes wanted to follow the bend and it drew me right in.
The lighting idea is great too, although the use of flash (if I'm right) has screwed a little too much with the contrast. With a stationary subject like this, it's a perfect excuse to use ambient light and a longer exposure.
Otherwise, I'd only change one other thing - and that's the order of just a couple of the pencils. I can see about 5 colours that disturb the flow... but they aren't foreign enough to be making their own statement.
I hope the critique is helpful. I only ever comment on DA when I'm inspired by the potential of a piece, so consider it a good sign!
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and these pictures are my testimony.
The events I have recorded should not be forgotten and must not be repeated."
James Nachtwey*
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