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Submitted: December 30, 2004
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Make: SONY
Model: CYBERSHOT
Shutter Speed: 10/100 second
F Number: F/3.5
Focal Length: 10 mm
ISO Speed: 200
Date Picture Taken: Jan 21, 2004, 12:12:38 AM

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one of my first shot with my digital camera...
learning about composition :)

any comment and :+fav: would be highly appreciated...

Thanks all my friends

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This is so neat.
It reminds me of the Crayola store at a local mall here.
There is this huge colour wheel. Different crayons. :D

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Hahaha... very unique, it does look like a ad for crayola or something... it should have the sub-heading "color my world" or something... nice shot, very refreshing to see something simple yet extremely effective !!! Bravo!!

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...miles to go before I sleep.
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nice ;_; i really wanna learn photographyy!!! gyaahh
baru belajar aja udah bagus :)
good bgt komposisinya..
colours it is. :) very nicely executed! :thumbsup:

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ah masa sih ndra, mau tau aja inputnya... januari 2004 tuh foto, dah mau setaon :)

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Interesting. Very strong image!

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Tanzen! Tanzen!
Fantastic composition :)

I once read that if you can incorporate an S bend into your photography (ie a river, road or some other natural kind of curve) you pretty much have a competition-winner. My eyes wanted to follow the bend and it drew me right in.

The lighting idea is great too, although the use of flash (if I'm right) has screwed a little too much with the contrast. With a stationary subject like this, it's a perfect excuse to use ambient light and a longer exposure.

Otherwise, I'd only change one other thing - and that's the order of just a couple of the pencils. I can see about 5 colours that disturb the flow... but they aren't foreign enough to be making their own statement.


I hope the critique is helpful. I only ever comment on DA when I'm inspired by the potential of a piece, so consider it a good sign!
héhé, the mix in colors makes this great !

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"I have been a witness,
and these pictures are my testimony.
The events I have recorded should not be forgotten and must not be repeated."

James Nachtwey*

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